I'm a recent graduate of the University of Illinois with a degree in Creative Writing. I started this blog as a place to post drafts in progress as well as finished works for the enjoyment of anyone who wants to read them. Everything posted before January of 2016 is from my college days.
Sunday, February 23, 2014
Spring 2014: Poem 3 Rough Draft
Assignment: write a poem about love or death that excludes the contents of a long list of words that would lead towards cliches or make the poem easier. Here's the first draft of what I wrote. (This one is getting formal comments only from the instructor and not the class.)
The Price for a Living Mirror
At the shelter from open to close
$150 adoption fee
$155 to the US Dog Registry
More than $200 to Petsmart:
2 collars
2 leashes
2 sweaters
Booties
Bowls
Food
Treats
Toys
Shampoo- for “super sensitive skin”
just in case
Pet stain spray
Nail clippers
A crate
A carrier
A name tag: Frankie after Frankie
Manning
Student loans
Ouch
Picking up poop with used grocery bags
before breakfast
Biking a mile back from campus between
classes for a potty break
Scrubbing drool or possibly pee from
the sheets
Going for walks instead of watching
Doctor Who
Teaching people play manners: no biting
now- uh uh uh
Putting the plushy black poodle and
loon on a high shelf
Spending the first week or two smelling
like a dog shelter
So worth it
Spring 2014: Poem 2 Rough Draft
(I'd like to emphasize the rough draft........ Certain cliches and cheesy things are gonna go. This is just the version that was workshopped.)
My New Best Friend
You've got four tiny paws
Or maybe three that get you around
fine.
Two eyes glittering with the joy of
being alive
Or maybe just the one it takes to see
what matters.
Two ears, maybe perky, maybe floppy
Or maybe the left one hears funny from
under the tatters.
One tail thumping against your favorite
people's laps
Or maybe crooked and tickling at
tummies.
One nose shiny and wet and cold too
early in the morning,
Or maybe with a deep cleft resembling
leathery butt cheeks with nostrils.
Whether you come to me in one piece
Or lose something along the way,
Whether you curl up on my cold toes
while I work
Or take a long nap nestled at my side,
Whether you face the wind in my bike
basket with your tongue lolling
Or turn backward to make sure I'm still
there behind,
Whether you prefer ear scratches that
make your eyes droop
Or tummy rubs that bring upside-down
toothy smiles,
Whether you shake squeaky toys until
the stuffing comes out
Or startle me out of my skin dropping
your favorite bone on the tiles,
I can't wait to meet you.
Saturday, February 8, 2014
Spring 2014: Article Contribution- Buses, Bikes, and Automobiles
http://readbuzz.com/life/2014/buses-bikes-and-automobiles
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