Friday, March 14, 2014

Spring 2014: Midterm Narrative

Assignment: 1-2 page young adult fantasy narrative. This is one section of the midterm. I also had to do stuff with this narrative, but this is the fun part.

Al Henrys looked up from where his Mastiff, Penelope, was laying a steaming pile on the boulevard. He winced. Jake and Tony Easting were ambling down the sidewalk towards him with smirks on their faces. Al pretended to ignore them. “Good girl, Penny,” he said when the dog was done with her business. She turned her enormous head upward in a slobbery dog grin.
Al was already reaching into his pocket for a used grocery bag when Jake sneered, “Aren't you gonna pick that shit up, shrimp?”
Ugh,” Tony made a show of grabbing his nose. “That stinks!”
Al rolled his eyes and said nothing. He told himself they'd be bored of him someday- as he had for the last two years. With a held gulp of air, Al bent to pick up the smelly pile. There was a shove at his back and Al had to propel himself further forward into a somersault to avoid landing in the muck. What he'd already picked up flew out of his plastic-covered hand in an arc, landing on the grass inches from his face. Rage flooded his head as the stench flooded his nose.
Before Jake could start laughing, the usually dull and amiable Penelope had tackled him to the pavement. Her teeth shone from beneath dribbling jowls and the growl coming out of her throat sounded like an enraged tractor. Jake shielded his face with his arms, but couldn't rise with the two enormous paws on his chest.
The sudden act of canine loyalty was the least surprising thing: Tony had hardly made two steps toward his fallen brother when three squirrels dropped out of a tree and started mobbing him. One climbed up his leg, onto his shoulders, and started darting round and round his neck biting his ears. Another nipped at his left ankle, and the third followed the first upwards to perch on Tony's shirt collar and scratch the bridge of his nose.
The beady eyes and cheeks swollen with acorns must have a daunting one when it was so close it had to be viewed cross-eyed. Tony flailed and ran off.
A few seconds passed and Al got to his feet. Penelope was still standing on Jake. Al stood over his head and said in a forced calm, “You have something to say to me?”
Jake's face scrunched up a little. “Sorry,” he mumbled.
That was as good as it was gonna get. All straightened a little more. “Thank you.”
Freak,” Jake muttered.
Penelope looked up at Al, back down at Jake, and then squatted where she was, peeing all over him.
When Al and Penelope got home, a man in his late thirties and wearing a red fedora with a few too many peacock feathers was sitting on the bench by the curb. “I know what you did back there, kid.”
What're you talking about?” Al said.
With the critters. Nice trick,” the man nodded thoughtfully, not taking his eyes off Al. “Especially for a newbie. What's your name, kid?”
Al.”
Al. Short and simple. I like it.” The man fished in his inner jacket pocket and produced an honest-to-goodness scroll complete with a velvety bow. “You'll need this.”
What?”
Now that we've confirmed your abilities, your magic will be blocked until you accept the dangers that come with it and learn the rules.” He shoved the scroll into Al's hands.
Al wondered if his blank look would be enough to get any more explanation.

Only open it when you're ready. The string will know. One pull and there's no turning back. Bye now.” And the guy disappeared. Along with the bench, which come to think of it shouldn't have been there in the first place. How had Al not noticed that?

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